Charlotte
Today we recieved our feedback for our preliminary piece.
Our peers thought:
It could have been a bit quicker
There was a possible continuity error, when Cristina's chararcter pulls the glasses away from her face
Good use of sound - appropiate
High quality framing
The use of a cutaway worked well as it showed variation
The colour was decent, there were no white balance issues
There was a decent range of shots
In our final piece (coursework), I believe that we show make more footage, so that when it comes to editing the overall piece will be of better quality.
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